He went to the bedroom at fifteen past one in the morning. He switched on the light. The room, small with windows and beautiful curtains was a compact one. He was in deep dreams when clock struck two. He was very thirsty, and there he was near the jug placed in the table near the door. After drinking enough water, his eyes caught the glimpse of the show case, adjacent to the table. With his eyes, the sleepy weary eyes he went through the items in the showcase. He hadn’t found time to appreciate the cute little things. The small car which once he played through out the day was now a dusty piece of plastic. He recollected his childhood memories; soon his mind was forgetting one thing – the sleep. He gazed through each and every object with utmost patience. He hadn’t shown such patience for a while. “Can’t you switch off the lights?” a loud voice from the opposite room. “I will close the door”, he answered politely. After closing the door, he came back to look the remaining, his eyes no more sleepy caught a round piece of metal. He observed it, he recognized it. He took it in his hand and stood still remembering…………
He was seated with his parents. The function had started a couple of hours ago and now it was time to hand over the prizes to the students. School Annual Days are always something to be remembered for years, the vibrant colours, the programmes and the event will be more memorable when one gets a prize in front of the huge audience. The loud speaker announced his name after the title “Honest student of the year”. He collected the medal, the round piece of metal.
He soon halted his process of observation and went near the window. He drew the beautiful curtains, stared the moon through the open window. The moon was almost a full moon. He continued staring for a while and did nothing.
“Will we be able to pass the paper today itself?” asked the man who had a pair of blue eyes. His companion replied “I am sure we will because the officer is a nice man, he is a currency lover.”.
They got down from the bus and walked briskly towards the office. They bought a newspaper from a nearby store and examined it.
The man with the blue eyes folded the paper and put in his bag. They didn’t read many of the headings. Of all the heading the following two were important to them.
“Save the country, fight against corruption”.
The other was the suicide of the officer, they should have met. The report stated that the officer had a medal in his neck which inscribed “Honest student of the year”.
32 comments:
nice thoughts and expressions
but why such a depressing ending?
suicide according to me is the most cowardly act by any one.
u write very thought provoking
posts
but they are very intense for a young person like u
Thoroughly mind blowing!
Being a fan of tear jerking endings myself, I fell in love with this!
Sure will come back for more!
once again hats off dude..de style is really nice...simple n clean just like yer previous posts..!! kudos !!!
what happens in between that led him to commit suicide????
Really interesting, Arjun! You're very passionate about your writing and it shows!
Thanks for visiting my blog.
Ranee
Thank you Arjun for coming by my blog, its comment from you and other bloggers like you that encourage me to continue writing.
Your short stories make an interesting read I will be coming back for more!!!
@ Arjuna
You are welcome
Eagerly waiting for your encouraging comments!
Good Work
@ prgupta
Thanks.
Love Ur writings i really don't have much 2 say except keep doing what your doing n don't let any one stop you from doing what you love 2do best
Love keke
@ kennettanard
I will.
great as usual. You friend have talent.
@ littlegirllost
Thanks.
Hello
u have good visuals senses and ability to narrate things very lively and touching way. keep it up
regds
@ holisticvibrations
Thanks a lot.
Its nice to hear such encouraging comments.
You write beautiful. That is a wonderful gift. My 28 yr old daughter is an aspiring author. Keep it up, it's an art that makes so many feel and think.
Actually, it is my husband that is the Photoshop whiz, he makes "music" with the computer and a pencil as well. Makes me jealous. Thank you for visiting my blog!
Paula
@ luv46kdz
Thanks for the comments.
Something which is really touching about the post !
Well said mate !
A very compelling short story. I loved it. Unlike what Anju said, I loved that his conscience kicked in and he took the harsh step -- suicide. I also loved that you let the unspoken convey the angst that may have preceded the suicide.
I have two that may interest you. Let me know how you feel..
http://www.indimag.com/2009/06/13/a-box-of-saffron/
http://www.indimag.com/2009/06/04/pedalling-thoughts/
Madhu
www.indimag.com
@ Push vs Pull
Thanks mate.
@ Indi
I am very happy that you have loved the story.Thanks for visiting and commenting in a positive way.
interesting and very thought provoking. good work!
HI Arjun,
sorry for my delayed response..
This story is very nicely done here..u r the one good explorer..keep it up and wil come here to see many more posts frm u ..:)
Keep in touch :)
@ Keith W
Thanks.
@ Being Pramoda
"Patience is a bitter plant, but it has sweet fruit" and I think your comments are sweet fruits.
Thanks for your appreciation.
lovely blog.... its comes alive!!
@ Rohit Dassani
Thanks. Do come regularly and share your views.
amazin!!
@ Rashmi
Thanks.
The story is shocking,striking and effective.Nice turn of expressions and descriptions about the honest man looking at his medal and his childhood play items in the showcase.you have managed to convey what u intended to without an overdose of sentimentality.thoroughly enjoyed reading it!good work!
@ nishaa
Appreciation accepted. Thanks.
Do visit my blog regularly and comment.
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