No one observes me even though I am visible. They won’t hear when I speak but I have a story to tell and you should listen, consider it has a request, a very humble request. I have seen bright sun shine, heavy rains, morning dews and many ordinary things which others fail to notice. I am proud to say that I have experienced ! There are always things which we consider as something very special to a individual but later realize they are common. But it isn’t wrong to say "I am proud", so I will till my day.
He entered the room and quickly exited. I liked this boy very much. When he is with me, I am really happy, may be his smile, his lips make me feel so.
It was a rainy day, long thick sheets of water drops showering from the atmosphere. There was darkness everywhere.
I was having a good dream when suddenly the sun rays glazed. I said myself that I went to sleep just now and how come………………………..
I was halted from thoughts when my eyes, which have experienced a lot, found a thick flame. The flame was brought near a thin paper tube. I was able to see the lips in the yellow flame, the same lips which made me feel good. The flame was extinguished by the boy. The tube had a red coloured end; the tube was burning at one of its end. The boy inhaled the smoke and exhaled his life. I was coughing………………………………………
He stood near me, the lips are no more his, he smiled, the beauty had gone, and it went with the exhaled air. My mind asked “will he be able to produce the innocent smile?". I coughed………………
The pain is equal for a human being as well as for a wall,even though I am stronger than human beings.
24 comments:
really nice work arjun, keep it up!!
You are very talented. I always look forward to reading what you write......please keep the stories coming.
dear brother, it was so nice.. and u created a suspense till the end.. it was a pleasure to read such blogs.
regds
I agree, you do need to keep writing!!!
Its rarely that one thinks from the side of a non living thing and empathize with it.. great thinking.. keep it up!
It's lovely. i love pple like u. keep it up.
It's lovely. i love pple like u. keep it up.
This is a blessing that is not common. Please always keep it up
Nice, did'nt get it at first but towards the end turned out to be nice. Emotions filled. Nice writeup.
very strong wrk of fiction..keep writing :)
simple neat n cool..!!! luvly write up :) keep rockin..!!!
im now a follower yeyyy!!!!!...
do visit m posts..awaitin comments :)
u have a flair for writing and you have a very impressive expression.
keep writing
@ Anju
Thanks a lot.
excellent stuff arjun! your thought process is so vivid! must say...interesting reads!
@ joseph
Thanks for the encouraging comment.
hi,
i really enjoyed your post, ti was really good for my reading and i would like to read another time so please try as much as possible to bring me another one next time, ok.
but you really make myday with this post i really love it.
please you really done well keep it up.and please read wide to get more for not body but me alone i really like it.
thank you very much.
@ lily pool
Thanks and I will try my best to meet the requirements .
detailing is good :)
@ rash rao
Thanks for the comment.
Good one.
@ Shas
Thanks :)
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your writing s are very good,,,, i think u have a good future in journalism, just continue doing it. keep dreaming and soon u will be shine!!!
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@ Annalyn Lansang
Journalism.........hum lets see.
I will continue writing and dreaming.
Thanks a lot.
u have a way of making a twist in the end which makes your works even more interesting to read. its very interesting i must say and simply written with great clarity and thought..............
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